Monday, June 29, 2009

Draft #45 if finished!!!!!!!!!!!

And another 45 to go, I am sure. After listening to the moving partner biographies Friday, I knew I was doomed. I was completely blown away! What am I doing in the class of such prfessional writers? You people are sooooooo fantastic. The energy in our room is not to be taken lightly. It was an awesome hour!!!!!
I am so sorry that I missed the reflexive part of the work, Brett. In my opinion, we or I was out for product: just getting it right. What a lesson for me to learn.

As I walked down Shiveley Hill on Friday aftenoon aiming for Blueberry (car) to get back into my protected world, I noticed the flower garden pouring into the brick path. Almost stumbled into it. Lovely flowers: bright lillies, Russian sage, yarrow, and the bright green leaves of the invasive violets. Comfort level rose and by the time I got the the parking lot, things looked serene again!!!! (Maybe it was the walking downhill!!!!).

Home to Arbor Woods with my personal flowers and as I looked, there it was: my comfort zone.
I worked late that night and I hope, as many corrections as you find, you are not bored by my voice induced by the flowers of my garden. Looking forward to class. Cheerio

1 comment:

  1. It's good -- I see how it can get easy to find yourself worried about the product - it's the process but we're not traditionally process but product - it's a great reminder of how a student can get his/her focus out of whack and be totally dead in the water - maybe never get back on track and finish the assignment - glad you got to a safe place - how can we provide that for the students as well. hmmm

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